Entry 045
Still working on the tickets, here is an updated version, though not complete. Also, working on a poster/decorative to send along with my press release (-thingy) that kind of mimics the tickets in some way. Those two things along with posters and the tickets will be finished by next wednesday.
I’m getting 1000 manuals in late next week from the printer, and will be distributing those next weekend. Stickers will be arriving that week as well. I got some kind of promo offer for $50 of free google advertising and will be taking advantage of that (scheduled to run the week I handout manuals). I have begun spreading the website to friends and their friends in order to get a decent amount of violations up so that public eyes will not be remiss. Thanks to those of you who have filed a report, please continue and tell your friends about the website, even putting it up on facebook would be cool… just something to generate some clicks.
Thanks!
excellent.
only 2 very small things:
less leading on the 2 lines beginning with: “one of your peers believes…”
you have a widow at the end of your last paragraph: “yourself.”
one other observation. glad the logo isn’t on this.
looking great.
Looking good. Just a few nitpicky things- I would tone down the yellow a little bit. And under “time of infraction” perhaps you have AM and PM stacked (to circle) instead of hours. Also, just a good test for forms, print it out and filled it in. Make sure you have enough space for writing (it’s just a little bit odd to me that the country space is bigger than city).
i agree I’d tone the yellow down. also, there’s a widow (single word) on the last line of the bottom paragraph–that’s usually a no-no.
if there’s anyway you can get some more breathing room that would be ideal as its pretty tight, but I imagine you’ve tried already.
and, where it says “Report Filed?” you might want a yes/no option to circle or check or “X” in lieu of a blank space.
oops, my bad. didn’t see Paul caught the widow first.
ok, now you really have to fix it!
Thank you guys for getting back so fast!!